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I was annoyed that in the entire story, they are running away from one enemy and they keep getting caught or the Zadar just mind reads them. Jack’s mother is smart and good at making weapons out of liquids in bikes. In the summary of the book, it is said that Jack has magic that can rival the rulers yet all he can pretty much do is barely manage to interact with the artifact and use its power. My one complaint is not enough power development for Jack. The flow of each event was smooth and didn’t feel too rushed or too slow.


Story was good but not enough development
